Thursday, September 28, 2006

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A poem I wrote while very caffeinated...heavily edited, of course ~

I experienced the pain of momentum
Upon the back of a Satyr.

He invites a vulgar walk through tepid woods;

Invites capricious nymphs to whisper starlight wisdom

Into the ears of the fruitless.


The trees muffle sounds of ecstasy;

Longing beside the rivers of Lesbos

And crying the chants of pagans and priests.

In vain, I stab my ears

To cast away the Morning’s whispers.


The path before me blocked

By witches of the erotic craft;

The musk of their art a sanguine fuel.

In vain, I burn my eyes

To cast away the Morning’s shadows.


Which sin, I ask you, is for worse:

To cast away my gifts for grace,

Or drink of the Morning’s quenching cup?

I’ve chosen the path my fathers shaped;

What good am I now to this Kingdom?


- Tod Kreider

1 comment:

Lindsey Renee said...

Your imagist inspiration comes through in this poem. I can feel and see all of it. Most of all, I enjoy your mythological references. In a way, it is one of your more accessible poems despite the allusions. I enjoy it a lot.