I am
but a lullaby
dancing upon
a charmed wind
as Venice sinks
quietly beneath
deepening blue
waves deciding
whether to go
toward a sunset
which will turn
day's glory dark
and forever be
lost.
but a lullaby
dancing upon
a charmed wind
as Venice sinks
quietly beneath
deepening blue
waves deciding
whether to go
toward a sunset
which will turn
day's glory dark
and forever be
lost.
2 comments:
Nice. Though I wonder why you had to separate "I am" and "lost" but spaces b/c the former seems like the title but the poem doesn't make sense without it and the latter seems like it might get lost being so set a part.
The imagery is wonderful! I especially love the first part "a lullaby/dancing upon a charmed wind".
Technically the "I am" portion is supposed to be the title. And, yes, the poem would be incomplete without it.
Thanks for the comment!
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